When we were orphans
we swam in a brook,
bubble, babble; roil.
One midnight we swam,
you, me, and the current,
sweeping our feet from under us.
Cracks formed in the orphanage walls
we watched, naked but clothed
in water, shaded by moonlight,
mesmerized by those walls,
breaking and solid.
We ate an egg each
the next day, I gave you half
of mine; the swim exhausted you.
I said I had dreams
after the water had risen
from my skin; I clutched
you while we swam,
hands sliding over you but not
touching. That was the rule
the orphanage had given us.
But I felt skin, dulcet, moist,
it would have been delicate, if not
for the orphan crammed within.
We were still orphans,
but we were soothed.
We rose with the next
day’s sun as two
orphans
at midnight, swimming.














Comments
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To twist one purest cause
Into an honest verse,
Itself, a call to angels.
The saddened lips of song that
Kiss away our innocence
From the vile mundane.
~justb
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It's a pity that the schools don't do any good poetry like yours and matts, maybe I would have come to enjoy poetry earlier,*sigh*. and yes i did notice the italics. luv the poem and am going 2
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Or is it really dirty? As sex goes, this is pretty clean.
How do you manage to have "hands sliding over you but not touching", yet "I felt skin, dulcet, moist"? Like how can you feel someone without actually touching them? don't give me any bullshit about symbolism- I think you might have a bit of a solecism here.
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sorry...
Anyways, I like the poem, it's very... something I can't remember the word for right now.
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I don't want to take your liver, I'll settle for your heart, mind, and soul.
Physically attractive?
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